The making of Smokey Coat Men

Smokey Coat Men won the monthly Pentaxforums Photo Award in May 2018. Theme: “People, Candid or Street”

I was asked to describe the making of the photo for a post in the forums. I found it to be good excercise to reflect on it. This repost will be under a new blog category called “streetphototip“. I already run it on Instagram @streetphototip and will expand the project here.

How the image was made:

Candid Street Photography is not new to me. After moving from Germany to New York City (NYC) in summer 2015 I began photographing in public almost exclusively. I trained in various ICP photo workshops and got involved with the local street photo community NYC-SPC. During the years I made a couple of pleasing photos in the capital of Street Photography. One of them is Smokey Coat.

Location etc..

  • Location: Madison Ave & East 37th Street, New York City
  • Time: Monday, January 9th, 2017, 3:37 pm
  • Weather: Scattered clouds, Temp. around -6 °C

Initial interest:

Hot steam rising from a gully next to the crossing between East 37th Street and Madison Ave.

Working the scene:

I start shooting from a standing point of view. Photographing pedestrians walking into and out the steam. I glimpse at my shots to check if there is anything interesting. The steam output is not steady. Cars pass by and the steam moves with their driving directions. I stick around and wait for times without cars passing by. In the distance, I notice a uniformed looking, hat-wearing character walking towards the crossing. Distinctive hat-wearers get my street photo attention almost always. As he gets closer I get a better sense of his classy 50’s outfit. He appears to be from another time.

I pre-visualize the scene and plan to shoot a frame right after he walks through the steam. I want to scale up the steam in comparison to the guy. To achieve this I need to crouch down and tilt my RICOH GR up a bit. In this position, the camera display becomes less visible

My Camera & Settings:

Ricoh GR

  • Spot Metering
  • TAv Mode
  • 1/320th
  • F5.6
  • ISO 800

The photo:

I half-press the shutter and prefocus on the curb. The man starts walking over E37th and I start photographing single frames. The first ones have the subject centered. As he moves I realize that the scene needs a stronger vanishing point and spin the camera slightly to the left.

He passes through the steam and I capture him in mid-step. His head positioned in the upper right, following the classic rule of thirds framing. The steam is sticking to his neck and coat. It connects him with the rest of the cloud down below. The steam’s triangle shape repeats in the building lines on the right. This makes the frame stick together more strongly.

Post Processing:

I am currently traveling and do not have access to the original image file. However, I tried to undo-edit the final photo to show how I remember the original to be:

I recall the original file format to be RAW .DNG. The photo lacked saturation, contrast definition and the character appeared much less bright. Especially his face was darker because of the hat. Also, the vertical tilt of the building lines was more pronounced.

I did the post processing in Adobe Light Room 6.

Cropping:

  • Cropping left to exclude a part of the car.

Basic Tone Adjustments:

  • Decreasing Highlights
  • Increasing Shadows
  • Increasing Whites
  • Slightly decreasing Blacks
  • Increasing Clarity

Local Adjustment Brushes:

  • Increasing Exposure, adding Clarity, Sharpness, and Saturation on the Face
  • Increasing Exposure, adding Clarity on the coats highlights
  • Decreasing Contrast on the Smoke
  • Adding Clarity and Sharpness on the Smoke, especially the Edges

Tone Curve:

  • Increasing Contrast by applying S-Curve, more adjustments possible

HSL Adjustments:

  • Increasing Saturation and Luminance of Orange and Red

Detail:

  • Increasing Sharpness

Lens Correction:

  • Applied a self-made Ricoh GR Geometric Lens Correction profile (download it here)

Transform:

  • Decreasing Vertical Tilt

Versions

Original (de-edited)

Edited

Brighter

Black and White

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